Five Nights at Freddy's Brings Back Memories

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When I was younger I loved to go to Chucky Cheese (do NOT laugh at me). The Chucky Cheese near where I live (about 30-50 minutes away) had animatronics like from fnaf. The was Chucky (of course) some pizza chef, a Dino or lizard thing, a bird, and dog, and someone I believe my mind has blocked on purpose (because it scared the shit out of me). When I watch people play fnaf I can just imagine how the Chucky Cheese people/robots could maybe have a wander mode too 0_o maybe I'm just over thinking things.
Anyway, I came up with an animatronic for fnaf (well two actually) Edgar the Raven and Roxie the Pirate Wolf. Edgar would be in the Story Telling section of Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, while Roxie would be a partner (in crime lol) to Foxy the Pirate Fox. Foxy has always been my favorite. The new kill animation in fnaf2 is epic and gets me every time. Balloon Boy also scares the shit out of me. I had the same reaction as Bashur when I first saw him. The puppet isn't as bad though because if you keep the music box wound then he never appears. On a scale of 1-11 with eleven being the scariest on the list it would go like this:

1: Bonnie (Toy)
2: Chica (Toy)
3: Freddy (Toy)
4: Freddy (regular)
5: Puppet 
6: Chica (regular)
7: Bonnie (regular)
8: Balloon Boy
9: Mangle 
10: Foxy 
11: Golden Freddy

Edgar the Raven would normally look very friendly during the day. Of course he would be black like an actual Raven, but during the night his brown animatronic eyes turn red and you can see black stuff (oil or blood) dripping from his beak and wings along win his talons. This would be what the phone guy tells you about him:

Phone Guy) Have you looked at the Story Forest area yet? If you haven't thats where Edgar is. We haven't had any problems with him yet....aside from the time he started reading a really dark poem from his memory storage device. We used to have this night called Halloween Night when he would tell spooky stories and such. We mainly have silly little ghost stories and normal children's tales stored in his memory chip, but uh...one person put in some poems by Edgar Allen Poe and the Lizzie Borden thing too. If...If he does start to walk around then all you need to do is lock your doors and maybe he will go away. If you turn on the lights in his area or some other area he will go there. He looks for kids because he loves to read to them. If you hear the sound of a heart thumping...close the door. Anyway I'm sure nothing will happen as usual, so Goodnight! (End Call)

Edgar the Raven makes a heart thumping sound due to the story called The Tell Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe. Another sound he make is a caw sound like most crows and ravens make. The last sound he makes which is the death screen sound is some kind of demonic sounding voice speaking backward (well yelling). When played back it says the Lizzie Borden Poem. You know the Lizzie Borden Took an Axe thingy. If you get to night 5 instead of the phone guy calling when you begin it has a man with a deep voice saying the line with 'A Demon That is Dreaming' backwards to you. The phone guy would call around 3am and say this:

Phone Guy) Hey! Uh...today some crazy parent came in for a birthday party that another parent was holding in the party room. They were messing around with the microchip inside Edgar's head and he started to malfunction. Don't worry though! That parent is now in jail. We took out what they jammed into the download data slot and...we don't know what did download and what didn't download, but we only saw photos of a little boy in his head. We removed them though! The parent was in a bad mental state at the prison. Apparently her son was kidnapped and that was the kid in the photos....we first thought that poor kid was one of the victims, but it turns out he was taking into custody of his father. Anyway...h-have a goodnight! (End of Call)

Roxie the Pirate Wolf is a normal colored wolf (grey wolf) only with blue eyes, a neck bandana, a gold earing hoop on her right ear, and a tear on her stomach. The stomach only has a little bit of stuffing coming out due to the people stitching it as much as they could without damaging the exoskeleton. She was normal and very friendly during testing and when they first introduced her to the establishment, but soon after they paired her with foxy she began to change. This is what the Phone Guy would say about her on night 4: 

Phone Guy) So you know Foxy right? Yeah of course you do. He lived in pirates cove until it was closed down due to some...issues. Anyway, Roxie was meant to be a first mate to Foxy. She was great with children until people started to get closer and closer to the stage. We think there was a glitch when we linked their chips together so they could both do an act together. Roxie seemed...to be very protective over Foxy...kinda not like a first mate rather like a...mate mate if you know what I mean. When the attraction was shut down both of them were deactivated...I think. Well, Goodnight! (End Call)

Roxie (much like Foxy) can run/sprint. At night her eyes are golden and shiny. Roxie, if in the same room as Foxy, is not hostile. The closer they move to you though...the most hostile she gets. If you see Foxy looking at the end of the hall or in between the two halls you should lock both doors. Foxy will attack from one side and Roxie will attack from the other. If you shut neither door they have a co-operative death screen. If it is Foxy, he has his normal death screen. If it is Roxie, she lunges (like in fnaf2 that foxy does) and kills you.
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